Author’s Note: Throughout, Fighting Ground by Avi you will learn how to be brave and how to grow up.
Saving a child from a house fire, fighting for your country, and protecting your family are all examples of courage and valour. Many genres of books included the themes growing up too quickly and bravery, but in my thought action and adventure have the best evidence of themes. In the book, The Fighting Ground, by Avi, readers will learn how it feels to be brave, which helps you become a strong person, but if you mature too quickly and think you are invincible, it can hurt you in different ways.
Although bravery is an important aspect to carry in life, being too brave can actually hurt you in multiple ways. Jonathan, a 13 year old, fighting in the Revolutionary War has a lot of evidence of his bravery in the story. For example, Jonathan was fighting, he took the big role of shooting a musket at the British during war. Also he saved a little boy that was scared. However, Jonathan was too daring; after the war he finally noticed that war wasn’t fun and games.
Well bravery is a big part of the book, the other theme, growing up too fast is equally as important. Growing up too quickly is not a great trait to have because Jonathan, barely a teenager, hasn’t lived through his childhood yet, and he still wants to take adult responsibilities. At the age of 13, Jonathan is joining the soldiers to fight for what is right. After almost his death and his close call with getting captured, he finally notices at the end of the book that he was too young for war.
Bravery and growing up too fast isn’t only discussed in Fighting Ground: these themes were also discussed in The Hunger Games. Katniss, the main character in “The Hunger Games”, took adult responsibilities by providing food for her family and also showed courage by taking her sisters spot in the games. Both of these characters share many traits, but are still different in multiple ways.
While bravery and growing up too quickly were huge factors of the similarities in both of the books, determination is what brought the two books together. Being brave and maturing too fast ,both have their pros and cons.
This is piece is really good and efficient because you are using your descriptive words wisely. You are placing words in right places, but I would go back through your piece and edit where you are putting commas. When reading your I have to sometimes go back and re-read a certain section to make sure that I am reading it correctly. Such as the sentence - For example, Jonathan was fighting, he took the big role of shooting a musket at the British during war. Otherwise, I think that this piece is very good and descriptive! :)
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