Philly Cheese Steak, No!!!!!

 Author's Note: I wrote this story in the point of view of the shoes I got for Christmas.  In this creative piece essay I addressed best sentence structure and where to put commas. 

Finishline is always quiet and warm in the early mornings.  Not today it is Black Friday, I mean I want to get my sleep, but people are talking with no care in the world. Black Friday again, second year in a row that I have been here.  No one even cares about me. The store has rough beds that we sleep on and they just want to make money.  They are now opening the doors; well we knew this was going to come sometime.

Wow!!  Many people are here, more than I expected.  The boys are all run after me; I don’t blame them because I will admit that I am looking fabulous today. Why not buy me when I’m on sale for $90. Kid! Kid! No please don’t put me on, your feet smell horrible I am begging you please don’t try me on. 

Nice!  Now there is a cool kid that wants to try me on.  His feet smell bad; also this person is being a little rough with me. You don’t know how good it feels to be loved and going home.  Home Sweet Home!!!!!!

Overall it was a good day, I mean I go home with a nice boy and hopefully I will create new friends on the way to his house.  The horrible thing is that I lose my girlfriend, Philly Cheese Steak.    Well I guess that my family now could bring me to Subway and buy me a new one!

Oregon or Wisconsin?

Author's Note:  Which team will win Ducky or Bucky?  I encourage you to watch the Rose Bowl because it will be close.  This post will tell you my feedback about what I think will happen in the Rose Bowl.

On January 2 Ducky is playing Bucky, which means the Wisconsin Badgers are playing the Oregon Ducks.  In my opinion the game is going to be close and the game could go either way.  If the Badgers play good I know they will win.  Russell Wilson will hopefully have his “A” game and the other team won’t.  The rose bowl is played in Pasadena, California, which is good because it always has good weather!

Poem for All of the Cowboys out There

Authors Note:  This poem is dedicated to all of the Cowboys that live in the Wild West.  This poem rhymes, so please read it all.  I put a lot of work to write this paragraph.

Cowboys are from the Wild West,

Many of them wear leather vests.

Boys are cowboys and girls are cowgirls,

There is a famous cowboy named Earl.

Cowboys get around by horseback,

Some cowboys named their horses Jack.

Horses are always nice,

I’m pretty sure they don’t eat mice.

They are big and strong,

Horses hardly do anything wrong.

Can horses fly?

How old are they when they die?

The food that you can put anything on!

 Authors Note: My favorite food is pizza.  After I tell you about the delicious ingredients in pizza and some restaurants I recommend,  hopefully your favorite food is pizza.

What is your favorite food? By far my favorite is pizza.  That’s because of the perfect layer of meat, cheese, sauce, and crust.  If you ever have a craving for pizza, here are some ideas of restaurants.  Well first my favorite is Dominos that is the best because they changed the taste of their pizza.  Pizza Hut is second in my opinion because, they have the best type of crust and I love the pepperoni pizza.  Pizza is the best!!

What's your favorite color?

Author’s Note:  Many people have favorite color.  My favorite color is red.  At the end of this writing I hope red is your favorite color.

Red is the best color in the world!!!!  The main color for the Pewaukee Pirates is red.  Many people like purple and blue as their favorite color.  Well the story is that I hate purple because it is Waukesha North’s color.  I dislike blue too, because New Berlin West’s main color is blue.  Red, red, red is my favorite because of the brightness of the color and because it looks good with everything.

Christmas the Great Holiday

Author's Note: Children that read this please remember to be good or you won't get presents from Santa.

               
Ho! Ho! Ho! Santa is coming to town. All of the little children are waiting for the special day of Christmas, when Santa comes and brings presents. The boys and girls are trying to be in their greatest behavior.  They don’t get on Santa’s naughty list, causing them to get coal.  So little children, be good or Santa will give you coal or maybe skip your home.

Best Time for Baseball

 Author's Note: I wrote a poem about summer.  It is a great poem but, it doesn't rhyme.  I put a lot of thought to if so, read it carefully. 

Summer is a great time of year!

Under bridges people go fishing!

Many people have sports and activities!

Melting ice-cream is a problem if you have a cone!

Early in the morning birds are singing!

Runs score in baseball!